Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Star Wars Fan fiction

Star Wars...

The Force Awakens fan fiction

Pre-warning: if you haven't seen the movie all ready there are spoilers in this story. And if you don't know all ready this is just my story about the relationship between Kylo-Ren or Ben as he will be referred to as in this and Ray. This is not an actual thing in the movie I just came up with this in my head.. it will veer off of the path of the movie and go to my story so this will not be the movie... This is a fanfic.

Ben
I have heard so much about this mysterious girl. She can fly a freighter and she can disable many of my guards. I want to meet her. She sound amazing.... How can I meet her. She is with the resistance and wants me dead. Maybe I can persuade her to the dark. Then maybe I could talk to her. But I must first find her.

A second commander came in to inform Ben that the droid and the two fugitives were spotted at a watering hole with Han Solo. Ben told him to head there and he will find the droid and the two fugitives there.

When they get to the watering hole Ben send all the troopers out to find the droid and the fugitives and bring them to the ship. A storm trooper finds Rey and BB8 and inform Ben of there location. Ben finds Rey.

Ben
I found her. I found this mysterious girl every one has told me so much about. I must see what she knows.

Ben uses the force to see inside her head and figures out that she had seen the map. and figures is doesn't need the BB unit if he has her. So he knocks her out with the force and carries her to the ship. were he puts her in restraints and deliverers her back to his ship. There he will interrogate her and find out what she knows.

He gets her into a holding sell in the restraints on her hands and her feet. Still knocked out Ben sits and waits for her to wake up.

Ben
She is so beautiful. She is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. I don't want to wake her she so peaceful when she is sleeping and not trying to kill me. As I kneel here I can see a piece of hair that has fallen from here top bun and is touching her face just enough that is looks like it was intentional. Her full lips are parted just enough so that I can see a little bit of her perfect teeth. I love the way her lips slightly move in her sleep just as though she is talking to someone. Her skin is perfect. flawless and it makes be wonder if the rest of here is like that.

Rey eyes flutter open and she momentarily is disoriented and confused on where she is. She looks down at a creature staring at her in a black suit with a mask with scars all over it like they had been to hell and back.

Ray
Where am I?
Ben
Your my guest. You mean the murders, traiders and theives. youll be realived to here i have no idea.You still wanna kill me.
Ray
That happens when your being hunted by a creature in a mask.

Ben takes his helmet off and sees that she is even more radiant when he can see all of her at once without the helmet on.

Ray
Wow.  He is surprisingly cute. I have never seen anyone quite as attractive as him before. What? Why am i feeling this. 

Ben
Tell about the droid.
Ray 
He's a BB unit with a thermohyper drive and a hyposkam idicador.
Ben
Its carrying a section of a navigational chart. We have the rest but we need the last piece and somehow you convinced the droid to show it to you. You.. A scavenger... You know I can take what ever i want.

Ben uses the force and gets inside her head.
Ben
Why so lonely, so afraid to leave. At night desperate to sleep. You imagine an ocean. I see it, I see the Island. And Han Solo, you feel like hes the father you never had. He would've disappointed you.
Ray
GET OUT OF MY HEAD.
Ben 
I know you've seen the map. Its in there and you'll give it to me.
Ben ventures deeper inside her mind to find the map.
Ben
Don't be afraid i feel it to.
Ray 
Im not giving you anything.
Ben
We'll see.
Ben pushes even farther into her mind and sees nothing. He keeps pushing and pushing but then starts to be pushed back out, Rey push him out of he head and straight into his. She can feel his pain, his fear.
Ray
You... Your afraid... That you won't be as strong as darth vader.
Ray could feel all his feelings. She could see his thoughts. She could feel something strong. something over whelming, to the point that Ben broke the connection. Rey didn't know what she had just done. She didn't know what she was feeling. She felt a strong pull. a strong pull to him.
Ben felt violated. He was the one to always get inside someones head not the other way around. She has the force. He felt the force strong inside her. He felt he could teach her the ways of the force. He knew he could keep her here against her will, but it would be easier for her to stay here of her own accord. Ben felt attracted to Rey. He could feel her attraction to him as well. Ben tries to get back inside of her head again. He brings up his hand and pulls his face close to hers, at first she resists. Ben:
Don't resist. I'm not going to hurt you i just want to show you something
He shows her his thoughts and how he imagines her, powerful, standing next to him, with armys behind them. Her being the queen and Ben as the king and the leader of the order. Rey then pulls her face away slightly.
Ray
Now i want to show you something.
Ray turns her face to his and throws an image of Him and her Standing on an island, together, hand in hand. Than shows him images of them sitting in a window looking up at that stars off of a green planet. And then shows him an image of them kissing.
Ben then pushed his face towards hers unknowingly then with in a second they are thrown out of those images and Ben looks deep into Reys eyes. touches her face and caresses her cheek. She leans her face into his caress he pulls her face to his. As there lips touch they are lost.


It started as a simple kiss just to see what it would feel like, then It became more then just a kiss then it became a release of all the frustration and all of the pain that they both had felt. Ben poured his hole being into this one kiss. Ray let all the sadness flow away and let all the feeling that she was feeling right now go in to this kiss. Ben pulled back afraid he would loose himself in that kiss then he removed the restraints Ray looked down at her hands, looks back up into Bens eyes and in one swift motion pulls his face back to hers returning the kiss that he had given her and they both poured everything out and into each other. Neither one had felt this feeling before. Neither one had experienced this much emotion all at once before. All they knew what that they needed each other and they never wanted to let go of this moment. Ben grabbed Ray around the waist pulling her  in to his arms. Ray as she was lifted up on to him rapped her legged about Bens waist. Ben walked her over to the wall and pressed her body between him and the cold metal. Ray moans out as her back lays against the cold surface. Ben taken in every ounce  of her screams. When suddenly they here storm troopers radio going off and they look at the door frightened that they will be found Ben puts Ray back down on her feet and motions her  over to the restraints. Ray feeling appalled shook her head no. Ben looked at her and silently pleaded for her to get back in the restraints. She did so this time.

Ben
I'll come back later. Okay.

Ray nodded. Ben kissed her one more time and then proceeded to exit the cell.


to be continued...






  


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